After the pitch we received post it notes from the rest of the class stating what we could improve. Many of our fellow students liked our ideas, thought that the ideas were unique and said that our step outline was very detailed. However they did mention things that needed explaining or changing. They felt that we had good ideas, but we needed to similify them, as the song is rather short. We have been looking at the Step outline and have changed some scenes to make it more organised and easy to follow. A student wrote down that our conventions seemed more pop than indie, our band is presented as an indie band, but does not stick the conventions. We have decided to make the video more tongue and cheek than demonstrating any procative images.
Written by Jessica Holdsworth
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